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Старый 07.10.2011, 05:47   #22
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В процессе перевода серии пришлось опять переводить песню. Те, кто это когда либо делал, знают все трудности перевода. Сделать это можно по разному. Или просто перевести найденный ансаб, или попробовать подогнать стиль, смысл, рифму. Или всё это ещё уложить в музыку, чтобы можно было спеть караоке. Но как все понимают, ансаб бывает разный. А может и ансаберы виноваты, а авторы песен. Как сказала Тамара композиторы в Корее хорошие, а вот авторы песен оставляют желать лучшего. Что вижу о том пою.
Песня I Can't существует аж в 2-х вариантах исполнения. И на оба варианта я нашла ансаб. Но это не особо спасло ситуацию. Для знающих английский предлагаю заценить текст.
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Even if I remove my makeup,
I can't do it without tears anymore
Even if the makeup flows down I'm used to that
Even if I get a call,
I can't look at it
Even if I close my eyes
I can't think of anything except your face

I can't even eat because I might think of you
Because I might not be able to digest after you left
Even today I live with tears
I can't listen to the music
because it might be a story of you and me
Because they might be like us,
I can't do anything
I can't live alone without you

Now I even pick up the phone
thinking it might be you
Even though I know it's not you I wish it was you
Please stop,
you are all I have
What am I going to do?
I can't do anything alone

I can't even eat because I might think of you
Because I might not be able to digest after you left
Even now I live each day with tears
I can't listen to the music
because it might be a story of you and me
Because they might be like us,
I can't do anything
I can't live alone without you

I can't
I can't
I can't
I need your love

What's the point of living alone?
I'm your girl
I can't do anything without you,
I know only you
I can't do anything without you
I can't even die because you might return
I can't do anything without you
I can't live alone without you
__________________________________________________ _____________________

Even if I eat I can't swallow without tears anymore
Even if I force myself to eat, I still feel empty inside
Even if I listen to music I can't hum along
Even if I watch a movie, I don't remember what I saw
I can't even eat because I might think of you

* Because I might not be able to digest it after you left
Even today I live with tears
I can't even get on the bus because someone might swear at me
I can't do anything because someone might make fun of me crying
I can't live alone without you

Now I can't drink without tears
No matter how many times I empty it, I think of only you
What's the point of living when you're not next to me
What am I going to do, I can't do anything alone
Even if I eat I can't swallow without tears anymore

Repeat *

I can't even smile without you
I can't even walk without you
I can't do anything

I need your love
What's the point of living alone, you know better
I can't do anything without you
Because I know only you, I can't even eat without you

I can't even die because you might return
I can't do anything because you might come and look for me
Today, tomorrow I want only you


Было очень непросто сделать лирическую песню на этом материале.
Но представляю результат. Под песню смонтировала клип для усиления эффекта.
По мнению моего редактора, людям одиноким и с разбитыми сердцами смотреть не рекомендуется.
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